Friday, October 1, 2010

Friday Writing 2 of 3


Write a short story that takes place on this small, tropical island.

41 comments:

  1. Once upon a time, there lived a little Indian boy and his name was Pancho. Pancho lived on a island with his family and some other Indian tribes. His family was the size of a village so he was never bored and always had brothers and sisters to play with. Pancho enjoyed swimming out around the island but he could only swim on the clear water and was never to enter the dark water of demons, which is what his old grandmother called it. This didn't even interest Pancho, nope. What Pancho wanted to do was go to the other side of the island. See, on the other side of the island there was another tribe. These two tribes never spoke to each other unless is was about a conflict. So one day, Pancho decides to walk over there with his older sister, Banana. They walk through all the trees and bushes and finally reach the other side. Once everyone see's them, they are warmly greeted and offered to join in on their feast and celebration. Later, Poncho and Banana learn that the other tribe was scared to come and talk to their tribe, so they just stayed away. Now the two tribes became one tribe and live happily ever after!

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  2. The water lapped gently at the sand and every time it rose in greeting, she could feel the sea mist against her already drying skin. Turning so that she was laying on her back, she looked up at the sun and waited. This was always the part she hated. Sometimes it took hours for the sun to dry up the water on her skin and even longer for her to change, but eventually it would happen. She'd feel a slight tingle on the lower part of her body and she'd wait. Wait until the tingling had stopped and she'd open her eyes to see her newly aquiered leg's and each time she saw them she couldn't help the fasination that sewpped over her. It didn't matter that it wasn't her first time changing, it was always overwhelming. This time however, she fought back the urge to sit and stare all day long, and instead stood up and began to make her way toward the center of the island. She didn't stop to explore, like the first time she'd been on the island, the first time she had changed, but instead walked briskly through the familiar fauna and trees until he came out into a small clearing in the center of the island. Here was where they'd first met and where they would always meet, until she found a way for both of them to be together. She stepped foward, toward the large crystal rock, the only object in the clearing, and circled it. She stopped when she saw him, a large smile blossoming on her sun tanned skin.
    "Hello Nicholas."
    And he responded.
    "Princess."
    She turned around, the same large smile present on her face.
    "Why do you insist on greeting the crystal when you know I am right here."
    "Because you are both here and there." She answered, pointing the the translucent man in front of her and then back toward the crystal where the same man lay, entrapped forever in time.

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  3. Once a Upon a time, there was a couple who had fallen in love but their parent's forbidded them to see eachother. The couple refused their parents wishes so their parents banished them to an island where nothing can escape. The couple was living on the island for 3 weeks, no food except what they managed to find on the island, no shelter except for the little hut the made out of trees. As time went on, the couple notices something odd about the island, it continued to sink underwater. Eventually the girl got fed up and decided she'd rather live a normal life with someone else than be trapped on an island with the one she loved so she tried to swim away from the island, but unfortunantly the sharks got to her first. And no one ever heard from the couple again.

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  4. Once upon a time there was a small tropical island that was simply beautiful. Although it was deserted and mysterious it still had that majestic feel as if it was overpopulated with thousands of people. One day there was a plane that was slowly going towards the island. Apparently the pilot was asleep and he was not in control of the plane. The plane crashed and the only people who survived was an older couple. They were both around the age of 37 and have been happily married for 10 years. They didn't have any children but planned of having a few within that year. The couple remained on that island for about 2 years and did not know what was to happen to them. The couple survived the whole way but one day they attempted to leave the island. The two constructed a oat out of trees and other items found on the island. once they were done they set sail. All was going well and they were so far out that they couldnt see the island anymore. A storm started to brew right after and it grew very dangerous. dangerous to the point where they were falling off the boat. The husband realized that his wife kept slipping off and almost didnt catch herself from letting go of the boat numerous times. He knew the next wave would immediately sweep her away. He knew he didnt wanna live without her because it was his wife and his entire life. Once the wave Started to come he instantly told his wife he loved her very much and that they would do everything together. She said it back and agreed and the wave got close and at that moment he grabbed her hands with his to get swept away as well.The wave hit and they both were killed tragically but they went together and that's what the husband thought the best method was in their situation. The next day a plane came and saw the crashed plane but there wasn't any survivors to be seen.

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  5. Once upon a time in a land far far away lived a mermaid named Layla who wanted to leave her family and live out on her own. Her dad was the richest merman in the see so he bought his daughter her own section in the bluest ocean and he built her an island for all of her non-mermaid friends. If anyone tried to swim or explore in Layla's part of the ocean without permission, then they would be forced to live in one of the island's trees for 5 years. Layla and her non-mermaid friends had sleep overs on the island and played truth or dare, told scary stories, and talked about their crushes. Layla was always sad because she had no crushes since she spends most of her time keeping people out of her island and ocean. One day the mermaid was picking bananas off one of her trees and she sees a man living in it and felt bad. She brought him out of the tree and they fell in love and got married, but Layla's rich father was mad because the boy wasn't a merman. He didn't want his daughter married to a human, so he made the island disappear and sold his daughter's part of the ocean. Now Layla is stuck living at home again with no husband.

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  6. Haha Ashley your story is great!! Thats what she gets for swimming on an island that was meant for no one to get out! lol

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  7. Once upon a time, a bunch of students saw a picture and began writing brilliant stories about it...did they do it out of love of deep thought or duty to their education? Did they do it for a grade? Were they simply inspired by the beauty? One thing is clear, these student stories were excellent!

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  8. Once upon a time there was a business man. This man had all the money he cound ever ask for. he grew up in New York City and the only time he went out of that city was for business meetings. He had never seen any place as beautiful as this island before because he was always trying to make the next dollar. Well one day this man woke up and he found himself lying on the beach of this beautiful island. At first he was panicking because he was supposed to be at work, but he was suddenly captured by the magnificant beauty of this tropical island. At that point, all of his cares went away. He now found himself never wanting to leave the island. This was better than any car or house or check he had ever had. He never tried to escape the island, in fact he is living there to this day. He loves life on the island better than when he was making millions.
    -Blake Foreshee

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  9. Once upon a time there was a couple who were filthy rich and wanted to invest on an island off the coast of Costa Rica. They took a visit to make their final decision and came across a group of people that were seen as wild people, they seemed to be living so freely. They were freaked out at first by how out of control these people were and tried to escape from the island but were stranded and forced to live upon these people and adapt to their ways. Eventually the couple took over and was seen as royalty because of how much money they had. They had children there and created a whole school system and government. The island was no longer as beautiful as it was when they had first discovered it. It had became very structured and identical to the U.S. but ten times worse, there was a sort of communism. Everyone was unhappy and one day one of the citizens just burned down the island and everyone on it to regain peace within themselves.

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  10. @Ashley i really like your story

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  11. On this one particular island there lived two gorgeous girls. then all of a sudden an airplane crashed in the water near the island. everybody on the airplane died unfortunately, but there was only one passenger who survived the crash he was very lucky. The girls noticed the huge crash and they ran to the guys aid. when they got to him they checked if he was alright, luckily he was. after they got to know him they both fell for him. it was very dramatic because the guy only was interested in one of the girls. the girls were best friends and they ended up not being friends anymore because one of them would be left alone. it was sad because the guy made a small boat and it only fit two people so he took the girl he liked and left the other girl by herself on the island. no happy ending for the girl left on the island by herself. hoping for her lover to appear one day and come for her rescue.

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  12. Getaway Island : It was this island in the middle of no where,its not even on the map but somehow when people have problems and things they are stressed over they will go to sleep with all the bad stuff on their mind. while they sleep they will wake up and see reality.they will be on this beautiful island that eases your mind. Everything you can imagine was on this island. Massage parlors, nail salons , beauty salons, clothing/shoe stores, everything that a girl can imagine plus more. For the gentlemen there was all sporting equipment , bars , boats, anything you can imagine for a man needs. they will have this whole vacation time to themselves and it was just their time to relax and socialize. If you have real serious issues there was a psychologists there to talk to you. After you have received hours of treatment you wake back up and all your problems has disappear due to this little island in the middle of no where.

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  13. As I looked towards the sea I could just imagine the all the other places filled with other people. But I knew that someday I would be able to go and visit them. Just then my friend was walking by and decided to sneek up on me. Even though she was trying to be quiet I was able to prevent it because right before she got to me she had sneezed. We then sat on the sand and just talked about our thoughts. Later on we raced back to our little village and right as we were going to our seperate homes my friend said to me"i'm glad i'm on this island because it's peacefull, relaxing,and I get to be with you." and right after she finished she left. I then thought about it and agreed. I also am glad to be with her as well everything else would come in due time.

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  14. The waves splashed over me like a cool blanket, a strange way to wake up. Judging by the position of the sun, I'd say it was about twelve or so in the afternoon. The sunlight pierced through mt eyelids like daggers as I tried to stand up. I felt weak, weaker than I have ever felt before. "Had I been lying here all night?" "Where am I?" "Who an I?" These questions puzzled around in my brain as I set out to find answers. "Hello!" "Is there anyone out there?!" "Anyone?!" No response. The sky was clear and blue with the sun hot overhead. I began to sweat. Suddenly, I felt a harsh pain around the left lower side of my head. I touched it and found a big welt the size of a golf ball. What happened to me? I was weak, hungry, tired and extremely confused. I decided to stop and try to figure out as much as I could. "OK, I've been walking for about to hours now and I know I passed this part of the beach before, hmmmm?- an island- It has to be, I'm on an island." "But I didn't hear anybody call back when I yelled! As a matter of fact, I didn't see any life except for the tree's and plants!" Deserted, isolated, I started to panic. I ran in circles in a frantic hurry until I collapsed from exhaustion. As I sat there letting the panic settle down, I watch the waves splash towards me then roll back into the sea. "This is my fate" I excepted, "Here on this beautiful, exotic island.

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  15. It was hard for me to write a story about this picture because I knew what I was looking at. Last weeks picture I like more because it could have been anything! Maybe that sounds a little weird.
    Anyways, i like Blake's story about living on the island with no cares.

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  16. As the little girl looked out into the deep blue sky, the waters were all she knew. She was a stow away on the island, her grandpa was a captain and she loved sailing. But then one day pirates overtook her grandfathers ship and she escaped never to see her grandfather, or family again. So the little girl made a life for herself and the ocean became her new family. The little girl loved the island and it became her home. She would collect shells everyday and remember her family that she sadly missed. In hopes that one day the ocean would bring her family to find her. She looked upon the sea, as a ship appeared in the great distance.

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  17. All of these stories are great. I really like helenas

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  18. In a land far, far far away. never to be found in google maps. There in that amazingly beautiful, tropical, and small island lived a little monkey named tootsie, tootsie was an astute, tiny, and funny monkey. He grew up in the middle of no where, he always asked himself where he had came from, where he belonged, why was he there, where were his mother and father..? tootsie always felt lonely, isolated, and very sad. One day, when tootsie was eating his bananas, he stood up looking at the sky, and said; "Why god? Why am i alone in this world? What is my destiny?, you might as well just kill me and just end my misery once in for all." then suddenly tootsie seen an enormous wave heading towards the little island, once again he looked up at the sky and said; "oh now you listen to my prayers huh?" tootsie met the Thailand Tsunami.

    THE END.

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  19. An island? Is it stranded? What can an island be? A present? Prison? Paradise? What would she think? How would she respond? A guy was having these thoughts a little while after waking up from a nightmare he had but when he awoke he saw that his nightmare he was having was not only a nightmare but it was also reality but was glad to be with the one he loved. At first when he awoke he got up to look for his fiance but when he found her he checked her pulse. It was very slow so he thought she was still passed out from the boat crash so he sat next to her so that when she would wake up she would see him and not be scared. While he waited for her to wake up he had those thoughts. He wanted to know what was going to happen to them and if they would survive. He wondered how could a wonderful surprise could turn into something so ugly. Was it karma? Fate? but what could he have possibly done to deserve to be stranded on an island with nothin to eat, no shelter, and no way of getting home? He looked back on what happened as if it were a dream. He surprised his fiance the morning before and took her out to sea for a romantic brunch. Before they could eat a storm hit they were lost at sea everything on their boat fell out while they held on to the side as hard as they could. All of a sudden an enormous wave splashed the boat and they were thrown off into the water hours passed while they tried to swim to saftey. His fiance was crying and saying she had a severe pain in the lower part of her stomache. He just thought it was cramps from swimming alot. The guy stopped wondering about the before and how they got there. It had been hours since he woke up and he was wonjdering why his fiance was still passed out so he tried waking her up but she wouldn't move. Then he checked her pulse again but she didn't have one. He got scared and turned her on her back. When he did so he saw she had bled to death. Something from the boat crash had stabbed her and she slowly bled to death. He started crying and he was about to be night time and he didnt know what to do and he fell asleep crying next to her. When he woke up he was in his bed next to his fiance. He was sweating, it was just a nightmare that he was having. He was so happy to be next to her and he kissed her and she woke up confused. All he could think of was that he was going to appreciate her alot more from now on.

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  20. In a world where Twilight and Edward Cullen were the lamest things ever, lived a cyclops with his family. The cyclops had a daughter named princess lumps. Princess lumps wanted to be unique in any way or form. Obviously being a one eyed monster wasnt unique enough for her so she turned to the dark side and claimed to like Twilight and Edward Cullen. She let every person who came her way know that she was in love with shiny vampires who drive fast cars instead of heated werewolves. She was sooo Team Edward. People eventually got fed up with her obsession for Twilight that they sent her away to a isolated island where she died. She wasnt missed.

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  21. wow reyes_kim15 you really did take the time to write out a whole story huh? lol
    aww youre the one who said you were very sweet but had no friends huh? aww ill be your friend!!
    that was so adorable!!

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  22. Once upon a time Fred, a billionaire, lived in New York. He wanted to have his own island and turn in into a Resort so he could make more money. He found this island and chooses it so, his pilot landed there. When Fred got out he said, “This is it.” He called for his men to take down all the trees and life on it. He didn’t even take a walk around the island. So he does, and he discovers an Indian tribe. They were all suffering barley living day to day due to shortage of food. The Chief tells Fred to leave at once or they will kill him. He see’s the children’s sadness in their faces. It’s a horrible scene for him so he calls of the destruction and decides to leave. When he gets back home he realizes that he has everything he wants and the tribe is barley hanging on for their lives. So he decides to go back the next day and this time he brought food for them. At first the fierce warriors point arrows at him. He puts his hands out saying stop. He takes out the boxes of foods and then tells the Chief that it’s for them. He waits by his plane waiting for them to take it but they don’t. He spends half the day before he decides to leave. The next day he fly’s over and sees the boxes are gone. He lands again and this time the Chief comes out and thanks him for his deed. Fred says hold on. He comes back with another big box of food. The Chief is overwhelmed and gives him a big hug. From that day Fred decides to give them food that will last for a week. He goes by during the week to see how they are doing. The End.

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  23. The crew didnt know what to do, as they sat hopelessly on this island in the middle of no where. Some of them were so negative and had no hope of surviving this major obstacle that was put before them, and others had a vast amount of faith. Some crew members sent out messages in a bottle, telling of the unfortunate journey and how they were now stranded on this island. Other crew members were too busy discouraging the ones with faith. Two days went by and still no one managed to rescue them. The crew members that had faith began to lose hope and become like the others. One day as the clouds were rolling in, it seemed like there was a storm coming in and it began to pour down with rain. One of the crew members randomly yelled, "We're going to be rescued today". While the other crew members looked at her like she was out of her mind, and told her shameful things, she managed to keep faith somehow. Then out of the gloomy darkness came a huge ship with a lively crew on board. Those crew members helped the abandoned crew and they celebrated on the ship as they returned to land.

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  24. Once upon a time there lived a tribe in a unknown island. This people from the tribe thought that they where the only people in the world. So they never imagined that somewhere in the world there existed things like cars, phones, and computers. One day there came one of the little kids screaming that there was something big approaching the island but they didnt believe him because that little kid always told tales. Later in the day when everyone was gathered in one of there ceremonies they heard voices approaching and they thought that they were demons and everyone started praying. Then they noticed about a dozen people coming from the trees wearing clothes and shoes. They greeted them and welcomed them to their ceremony and asked who they were. One of the guys from the tribe called larry noticed one of the girls and he thought hat she was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. While this new people stayed with the tribe Larry and Ginny fell in love and had the best moments of their time but then Ginny had to go back home. Ginny loved Larry but if she stayed she had to leave everything behind and learn how o live in the wilderness. In the end it was decided that because they loved each other so much Ginny was to say behind so she gave up everything for him. The years pasted and they lived happily ever after.

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  25. "Honey, let's leave, everyone's waiting at the dock. The police are on their way, they'll leave if we're not there," cried Rachel. It was a quarter to three, the sun was high in the sky as it beamed down on them.
    "No we can't leave, Rachel," Dylan said.
    "What are you talking about?" she asked incredulously. "That man -- that killer -- is still out there, we have to go. Right now!"
    Dylan shook his head slowly, his expression unreadable, as he walked toward her. He put his hand on the back of her neck and pulled her toward him and stuck her with the knife he had hidden behind his back. Her eyes bulged as she looked to her stomach and found that she was bleeding.
    In a guttural voice, she said, "It was you."
    He let her fall to the ground, and walked away to find Louise, Rachel completely forgotten as she lay on the floor dead. Rachel was the last victim that he had needed to rid of, everyone was checked off his list. Now he and Louise could live on the island in solitude, together forever. Just the two of them. He found her by the dock, just where he expected her to be. Jogging over, he said, "Louise, come on, let's go back to the cabin."
    "What are you talking about? Where's Rachel?"
    "She'd dead. Now it can be just you and me, Louise. Like you wanted."
    Her eyebrows scrunched. "Dylan, that's crazy, why would I want any of this?" Then it donned on her what he was saying. She realized who the culprit for all these killings was : Dylan. Fear began to consume her, and soon she couldn't breathe. Her best friend, the man she'd grown up with, knew her whole life, was a cold-blooded killer. The shotgun in her hand was brought slowly to point at his chest.
    He came toward her carefully so as not to scare her, but it was too late for that.
    "Don't come near me, Dylan, or I will shoot."
    Still, he came, and soon he would be too close for comfort. Louise began to tear up because she wasn't bluffing, and as much as he loved Dylan as a friend, as a brother, she knew she wouldn't hesitate. So when he came too close ... she fired.

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  26. @ The mermaid stories. Very cool:)

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  27. Oh wow! Sal why is your story so sad!!! Haha it was soo funny! But that's sad. It happens!

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  28. I like Loren's story, it is sort of like mine and very creative.

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  29. ..I wake up to find myself laying in the sand, while water is riding up my feet. I feel ooze on my face, only to find out its blood dripping out of my forehead. Every inch of my body feels ad if I was run over by a car. After a few attempts I was finally able to stand up only to realize I'm not alone. People screaming and running all around. What happend?. My head is still spining so I can't make any sense of anything. I try to walk, but feel so weak. I am in so much pain and don't know what to do. As I sit on the sand I realize the plane I remember being is in bits all around me.
    Did we crash? How? and where? I get my head together and pull my strength to try to help anyone in need. Everyone is just acting crazy as if there was mob.

    Then I see her. Laying next to tree. I thought she was dead, but I could see her stomach moving back and forth every time she breath in and out. I ran up to her to see if she need anything. Besides a few cuts and bruises she looked okay. I picked up and placed her on top of a matteres that must have been on the plane. Logically, anyone would think where would a matteres come from, but in that point I didn't care.

    I start running around and see what else I can do and see a women being chased by a werewolf and another by a vampire. Okay now this is getting too weird. Where in the heck did we crash? I run to help but they just disappear. I start to hear the sound of circus coming from behind me, only to turn around and see clowns, elephants, and all sorts of thing. Everything starts to spin and feel dizzy, and I fall back and lay on the carpet. Oh great now a carpet.

    "Would you like so more water sir?"

    I wake up to see the same women who I had placed in the matteres staring at me. Wow have i've been asleep the whole time.

    "No, make it a beer. I need a refresher." I said.

    I sit back to relax and laugh about my crazy dream. Crashed into an island with vampires and werewolfs. I start to feel turbulance and it freaks me out a little for some reason.

    "We are expierencing a little turbalance and if we could have everyone return to their seats. Thank you."

    A Little turbulance turns into a massive shake. The whole plans starts moving and everyone starts screaming. I don't want to believe this is actually happening. I look to my left to see the same werewolf and same vampire. Then a sudden drop of the plan as I feel it drop faster and faster to the ground. I just close my eyes and wait..

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  30. Paradise in Hell
    Michael found himself awakened by the cold gentle water. He opened his eyes to find himself staring into a big blue sky and a bright sun. The last thing he could remember was being told that he was banished. Holding his head, Michael sat himself up. He knew that he was far away from the town. Complex thought flooded his mind. "I'M FREE! But what does this freedom come with. I'm alone. I shall never see my friends again. But I never have to live under the wrath of the evil mayor. What will I do to survive? Is dieing worth this over -exaggerated freedom?" he thought aloud. Michael got on his feet and saw that his hands were bloody from the wound on his head. Michael started to walk farther into the forest of the island. As he was walking he could hear the sound of a dog barking. He came across a small clearing, with a small wood hut, but with nothing in sight. He could still hear the barking and it was louder than before. Confused and dizzy, Michael walked toward the sounds. Suddenly a dog jumped on his chest, knocking him down to the hard sand under him. The dog growled and barked with as much intensity as a lion protecting his meal. A woman emerged from the hut. The woman was beautiful. She had long black hair and bright green eyes. Michael thought that he was hallucinating from his head wound. The woman called off her dog and helped Michael up.
    "Who are you and how did you get here?"
    “My name is Michael. I don’t know how I got here but I know I was banished from my town. How did you get here?’
    The mysterious woman handed Michael a hand made wood cup with water. “I was left here to die by my crew. I am … I was the captain of a ship.”
    “Oh. How long have you been here?”
    “Three years. Get comfortable and stay out of my way. There is no way off this island. I have tried. The current pulls you back. So you better get a hut built quick and you better do it fast. The nights here are below freezing. The days are beautiful but the panthers are carnivorous. If you stay out to long they will track and kill you. Hotshot here helps warn me about them. They stay away from open paths, like around the water and here. They attack anything, even each other. Everyday is a fight for survival. Good luck, Michael. Oh!! And welcome to paradise!! … in Hell.”

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  31. I have no idea whose story I like most. They are really good!! I am jealous of some of them. But I like them very much!

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  32. Wow! These stories are long! i read some of them. There funny, sad and so cool hahah.

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  33. Half way around the world exists a small island known as Blue Waters. With a population of only 1,000 people, it is one of the most secluded places known to man. Although the community has no regulations or police to protect the people, there have been no crimes committed. There are no jobs on the island besides volunteer work to keep it clean. All residents receive the same check monthly and can spend it how ever they please.
    But recently, governments from all over the world have became involved with Blue Water Island. The governments want the people to join their countries so they can gain money and enhance their nation. Everything for the people on Blue Waters island was would be soon to change.

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  34. Giovanni, very creative story I like the wareworlfs!

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  35. I like all of these stories.
    We all have great imaginations.

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  36. avoiding civilization and tired of everyday society. many people try to find a piece of paradise, a piece of mind and away from destruction. destruction of the human mind and people always arguing and fighting over religon, money and power. these people come to find this island, untouched and a safe haven for them. they come to realize theyre away from it all and decide to make it a little more controlled. the group of people decided to make sand dollars into actual currency, people had specific jobs, and there was a leader for every tribe. this started to become more and more like the "world" they just left. it soon became the same and this as we know it is now called Hawaii..........haha whack...its 12 in the morning
    dont know what to write haha

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  37. Once upon a time, there was a little puppet named Bob who was scared to death of water. Unfortunately, Bob lived in a island; water, the sound of waves crashing, hurricanes all surrounded him. Poor puppet, for the last 15 years of his young life, was always in his room playing with his best friend turtle, Lyla, never minding to go out to see and experience the beautiful waters of that surrounded the island. One afternoon, Lyla had an itch to go swim 2 miles. Not asking Bob if he wanted to go swim, she left without telling anyone. Bob went into his room and started crying because he thought he was a horrible friend; Lyla always wanted to swim but he couldn't do it. He put his face out the window to let the wind dry off his tears. "HELP! HELP!!", cried Lyla. Bob could see her gasping for air, trying to stay above the water. With hesitation, Bob finally gets the courage to atleast get out of his house, but he didn't want to step forward. "HELP!HELP", cried Lyla. Now slowly starting to sink, not being able to see her face, Bob runs as fast as he can to the shore and jumps in the water to save Lyla!! He drags her to shore and kisses her forehead. "I'm so happy you are ok!!!"said Bob. She gets his little puppet hand, stand up together, and walk back to Bobs house,holding hands the whole way. :)

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  38. everyone who lives on this island is always happy but is it because of the scenery?can the environment youre in do that to your way of living?well,these people are always having fun,no arguing,always laughing.no such thing as crying,backstabbing or lying.thats why everyone loves living here and no one will leave.why leave something that makes you happy?

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  39. sal,why so sad???lol.poor girl.

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  40. There once was a guy on an island, this man had been stranded for almost a straight week, scavenging off whatever he could find on the island. Soon he had begun to run out of food on the island and had prayed that God would save him. Then the next day a rescue boat had come by the island to save him, the urged to climb aboard to safety but he refused. He claimed,"No, no thank you, God will save me." The rescue boat looked at him puzzled and left the stubborn man on the island. The day after that yet, another rescue boat comes by the island to try to rescue the man, but he replies with the same response,"No, no thank you, God will save me." The rescue boat looked at the now emaciated man, and knew there was no getting him on the boat, and left. Two days later the man died of starvation and arrived in heaven, the man eagerly runs up to God and says, "HEY! WHY DIDN'T YOU SAVE ME?!"God looks at the man with the same puzzled face the rescue boat gave him and replies, "WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, I SENT TWO BOATS FOR YOU!!!"

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  41. @Ashley Grifftith

    SHARKS???? I dont know why I figured your story something like The Notebook on water. hahaha

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